So you previously mentioned in a comment that you think that you messed up Fenris' personality, that he isn't as broody as he normally is... thing about it like this... Hawke is Hawke... no one is going be broody with her, just everyone else. So I thought you did good on that front. He is broody with Anders, which seems right but with Hawke he isn't.

Are you going to make Sebastian and Fenris friends like in the game? I think it is a cute bromance so I will def. make it so in my story... Aww I think about it and it makes me fuzzy haha.

Great story!!! Such a fun read