Here it is CH 16!! It's a lot of talking... so much to cover... I think I'm pretty happy with it. I like the end, though it does feel rushed I think so I might edit that later on.. but I won't be as active on here for a while because of school... so that might wait.

Hope you like it... I like the beginning and the end, but i'm not sure about the middle lol

and the picture is the end, where Fenris pulls Rem into his arms... though it looks rushed too... so I might fix that up later too lol and Fenris looks odd in it but I can't figure out how to do what I see in my head

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